The Battle of Britain

Continuing our work on Narrative, we have been looking at techniques used by authors to engage readers. Children looked at a range of texts where the author had attempted to build tension. Children then had a go at writing their own short pieces imagining that they were flying a plane under attack during the Battle of Britain. Here are some examples.

Battle of Britain

By Rahul

I was hit. The engine died and the fuel ran out. There was a long pause. I could feel that the plane would lose trajectory and then it would crash down. The plane was traveling at a dynamic speed.

The fuel tank exploded. For a second I thought I was going to faint but I bucked up and stayed calm. The plane lost trajectory just as I predicted it, turned to 80 degrees. The air rushing down at me at a rapid speed frightened me. I was too scared to go on the ejector seat and press eject. It was too risky. My mind was telling me to stay away, it was at the stage where the plane was upside down. I started to feel like I was losing consciousness but I just ignored my body and got on the ejector seat. I ejected. The plane exploded and then part fell down. The temperature was extremely gelid. Up in the sky. I accidentally miss-pulled the ripcord on my parachute. It wouldn't open. I was heading to the sea.......

The Battle of Britain

By Nenah

I was hit. As soon as I fell I couldn't quite see what was going on. I was on a plane and really high up. Suddenly the plane started to go down and down. I felt as if I was going to die because I didn't know what to do. I had sweaty palms and my heart was pounding. I went to the cockpit but no one was there. I had to take over but all the controls were broken and I didn't know what to press. All of a sudden the plane went faster and faster like is was losing gas. Soon I could see the sea underneath me. I got a parachute and rushed out. The whistling sound of the air blew across my face as I saw the plane crash into the sea. The parachute swung me like a puppet through the air as I heard a massive CRASH!

Battle of Britain

By Nathaniel

I was hit. It was within a blink of an eye, everything was going through my head. I was so shocked, I was as still as a statue, The plane was spinning around in the air. I felt sick. My pilot next to me was unconscious. I did not know what I was going to do. Time was ticking, there was not much time left. I released that the person next to me was dead at the same time the plane was heading towards the ground. I had to think quickly. Deep inside me something was telling me to get out so I took off everything that I didn't need and I jumped out the plane. While I was heading towards the ground I could see the plane burst into flames. Then I quickly pulled my ripcord and my parachute opened out like a giant mushroom. I was happy that I was safe. I saw my plane crash onto the ground and explode into a ball of fire. The good thing was that I landed safely on land, I felt I had been torched, but I was safe.

Battle of Britain

By Jaydeep

I was hit. The rocket had hit me, I didn't even know anyone was behind me. I felt like I had been electrocuted. A teeth-clenching pain rushed through my arm. I had to get to ground but my plane wouldn't respond. It became jammed from the moment the rocket hit me. I could see smoke emerging from the bottom of the cockpit. I could see daylight in between the black dark clouds. The RT was dead and hissing. I didn't know what to do. The fuel was leaking, it was going to blow. My life shouldn't end now. I heard a voice “Save yourself, save yourself” It was my voice. I soon took notice. I disengaged the oxygen and the radio. I didn't know what might happen to my family but I had to take a risk. I jumped out, the parachute was jammed. The air stung me as I was rapidly falling. I was petrified. I kept pulling the ripcord until it would work but it didn't . I didn't know if I was going to die hard or live. I fell in the water, the water stung me like a wasp. I was alive. For now!..........

Battle of Britain

By Abu-Bakar

I was hit. I didn't look back, a missile had came crashing into my plane. Suddenly a big bang came from the engine room. I then realized that the oil was leaking. Sooner or later the plane would have blown to pieces. It was frightening looking at the pilot dead beside me. My hands were shivering with fear. The plane wouldn't respond, it had gone crazy. I could feel air rushing past me. I felt my heart beating like never before. There was no oxygen, I was running out of breath. I knew even a slight move could blow the plane. I jumped out of the plane and took out my parachute, I felt the air pulling me up. Soon I came splashing down into the sea.

Battle of Britain

By Abazz

I was hit. My co-pilot said that there was a medical box somewhere. My right leg felt like it was broken. My co-pilot was flying the plane. I hobbled over to the door of the cockpit,t here it was. I bandaged up my leg and crawled back over to my seat. The plane had lost its left wing. Another plane shot a missile into the wing. My co-pilot was almost dead hanging on for dear life. Then a missile came flying towards the right plane wing. Then boom! My co pilot was dead. I was filled with fear. Both of planes wings were clean off by now. My belly dropped with sorrow. The plane smelt of diesel. The plane was arcing, tossing ,turning. What could I do? “Jump out of the plane!” someone shouted. I refused. I had to stay. “Jump out the plane!” My Voice. I obeyed, because the plane was burning. I disconnected my oxygen and radio. I jumped out the plane, pulled my ripcord for my parachute. I felt like a jellyfish floating through the air. My leg was killing me, it felt like pins and needles were in it. I also felt bad leaving my co-pilot. I watched as the plane went spiraling with a fiesta of black smoke following it. The sky was filled with sadness. The plane went crashing into the water, sinking to the sea bed. A sad thought hit my heart. How could I...? How could I leave him? Underneath me was a river of rubbish, bog, seaweed and plastic bags. The water was a disgustingly browny greeny colour. I splashed in to the ugly river, looking for any sign of life. Where do I go now? Where? I thought. I was alone.